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Short Film Critique. +k

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Childstar.
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I'd love to get a Critique on a short film I made today, I've yet to do titles and a final grade, but before I do I'd love to get ripped apart.

The guidelines were 1 min or less, 2 characters, No Dialogue, 2 Locations Max.

Password: Carrots

Colour Silent - Rough Edit, with Audio from Upped Ante Media on Vimeo.


Nov 27 2013 8:22PM
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Forcillo
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Hahahahaha that was really funny.
Nov 28 2013 12:30PM
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Brentizzle
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fuck yeah. i just wish you could of had a third character walk in after.
Nov 28 2013 12:36PM
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gusestomp
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hahahah funny as hell, i liked it
Nov 28 2013 1:36PM
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CheddarJack
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I love how when the second guy gets the carrot from the first one his head immediately falls back. Good stuff.

If I had one critique, I guess I didn't love how the guy turns away and puts his hand on his chin. To me, it would've been a little better if he showed more confusion, rather than just seeming stumped.
Nov 28 2013 11:14PM
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