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Critique my night shots edit !

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steezyshit
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Could you critique this edit i've made with the nights shoots I got in the past month. And also does anybody know why in my time lapse in the end the stars are blurry ?

Thank you.
Oct 5 2013 4:17PM
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steezyshit
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^Also watch the video with headphones to hear all the trampoline and roller sounds.
Oct 5 2013 4:18PM
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steezyshit
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Nobody?
Oct 7 2013 12:16AM
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No.Quarter
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were you focused to infinity?
Oct 7 2013 12:51AM
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steezyshit
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Oh ok i guess I tried to keep the shed in focus too much
Oct 7 2013 9:12AM
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chris.G
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You could benefit from a little more lighting I think, but you definitely got some good shots with what you had.

I'm not sure if you color corrected these or not, but I would do some work to make the light more white. There's a lot of yellow in there, you may want to get a white card and adjust your white balance next time.
Oct 7 2013 3:13PM
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steezyshit
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Yeah so for the color I did correct it I kinda liked the orange but I was able to put it white I'll try it next time to see how it comes out.

Thank you !
Oct 7 2013 5:24PM
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chris.G
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For sure! It is really subjective when it comes to the color correcting. Whenever I see yellow/orange, it seems almost home video-ish unless its for a specific type of scene that is suppose to be warm - like a wedding or Christmas or a colonial movie where the light is from a candle or fireplace. But if you like the orange in your night shots, go for it! Just keep it consistent and be bold!

I really liked the composition of those shots thought. Good angles that kept it interesting. Keep it up!
Oct 8 2013 12:11AM
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