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Critique my homecoming week video!

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Chompo.
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Shot this during homecoming week for my TV Productions with one of my friends for the Katy Perry "ROAR" contest which could potentially bring her to my school to put on a concert if we win. Let me know what you guys think about the editing/filming and everything else

Mainly shot on a 70D with kit lens

Oct 1 2013 5:48PM
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Forcillo
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Sorry bud, Gavin Rudy's got this contest in the bag
Oct 1 2013 8:04PM
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Chompo.
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Which video was his? I'm honestly not expecting to win. More just looking for a critique on the video
Oct 1 2013 9:23PM
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Forcillo
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Lakewood High School Lip Dub 2013 - Roar from Lakewood High School on Vimeo.



As for your video, I thought it was okay, but pretty disorganized. People were just in crowds and running around, but there seemed to be no point to it, unless it was all around the football game.
Oct 1 2013 9:52PM
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Chompo.
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Their video is insane, but its only supposed to be 2 minutes max for the contest so that is where I am a little confused on what they did.

As for organization, I can see how it would come off as confusing, but it really just shows what all the classes did on their spirit days, the parade, and then the game. But i can see how someone not familiar with how my school does homecoming week would see it as disorganized.
Oct 1 2013 10:01PM
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Forcillo
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Oh i dunno if he actually entered, I just figured that the best school video with roar would be eligible. Whateva tho.

I would find a way to label the classes. Not literally, but maybe divide them up and have a shot of some posters, like 9th grade, 10th grade, etc. Just so that we know what we're looking at.
Oct 1 2013 10:20PM
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