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Short film Portrait of The Mountains (critiques welcome)

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jibcrew1
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The majority of this was shot out of the back of a car i thought it turned out alright but i also just made it for myself and just wanting to see what some of you have to say about it also this was the second time working with crop marks and first time using ones this thick thought the framing was pretty good i moved most of them to fit and tried my best with it

Sep 25 2013 9:21AM
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jibcrew1
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bump for anything
Sep 26 2013 9:49AM
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bump
Oct 1 2013 9:27AM
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I liked it, and it looked pretty, I don't know if you were trying to tell a story but if you were then it lacked focus. Overall 9/10 for how it looks 4/10 for feel of the vid. One last thing I hated that hat. Tell me if I am missing a big portion of the story.
Oct 1 2013 10:25PM
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jibcrew1
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where is the hat and i might be able to give you a answer because right now im not sure exactly what youre talking about
Oct 2 2013 9:01AM
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the one person that was in the video was wearing a hat
Oct 3 2013 10:33AM
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Tikayt
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Shots are okay, I mean, nothing ugly but nothing brilliant either.
But I didn't get what you're trying to show the viewer. What are you trying to show, what do you want us to see and why ? (ok don't answer these questions now, but before shooting you must ask yourself, "Why am I doing this"). Some fade transitions weren't justified, some were.
Oct 3 2013 3:09PM
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