Replying to Critique on summer edit?

i dont really know what this edit is. it isnt really a true representation of my summer, as i did almost 3 weeks of travelling/being at festivals where i didnt have my camera. so i spose more than anything it is a collection of shots i like from my summer.

I must say i grew less and less fond of this edit the more i worked on it, i found i was noticing more and more things that i didnt like about it ( maybe that is the case with everybody?) but i'd be interested to see what you guys thought of it solely from a filming/editing side of it. its still really a draft as i have one last camping trip with a few friends before they leave to uni/travelling.

watch in full screen please.

summer from Joss Baldwin on Vimeo.

password ; draft