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Critique my reel first draft

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homestar
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I'm putting this together for a couple scholarship applications. This is just the first draft but critiques and feedback would be awesome.

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eheath
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I think you could cut a lot. Lots of similar shots and too many timelapses IMO.

If you wanna really knock some socks off, dive into the audio. Putting some sound design into this piece would take it to the next level.
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homestar
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Thanks

and bump.
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