Replying to Longboard Edit Critique

Hi guys. After being out all summer from a broken collar bone, I made my second longboard edit. Its my second time using Final Cut Pro, and I used a friend's hero 3 black. I think it came out pretty well. The two biggest things I want to improve for the next edit is to make it more stable, and to get a better overall flow with the video. I'm just wondering how you guys like it, and what I can do to make it look better next time. Thanks!



there it is. it looks really good on my computer, but i lost a lot of quality when i uploaded it to youtube. kinda annoying.

here's my first edit if anyones interested. first time using FCP X.

Sunrise Longboarding from connor wyckoff on Vimeo.