Replying to Newb Critique Thread

One of my first actual edits, I have been editing for a while but not seriously. Critique the editing not the riding. I know some of the shots could be shorter but I have no idea what I am doing. The equipment I used was a tripod (used it as a steady cam kinda) and a sony HD camcorder not sure the model.

A Evening With Paul from TheDailyBasisCrew on Vimeo.