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Critique my new trampoline video !

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steezyshit
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I'd like to have some critique on my edit. Any tips for filming ( just consider the shot of the guys with the green tank top) and overall filming ?

And also does anyone know I I could of done the motion tracked text so it doesn't move because I tracked it on a pink tape at the bottom of the tramp and while he goes in front the text doesn't follow.

Thanks in advance !


Jul 28 2013 9:39PM
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steezyshit
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anyone ?
Jul 29 2013 6:59PM
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jeb_b_vt
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I liked it! the filming was pretty good and editing was alright! I would either get rid of the logo all together, or make it bigger at the beginning or maybe in a bottom corner and somewhat transparent. The split screen was kind of awkward and out of place but besides that it looked good to me! nice work!
Jul 29 2013 9:12PM
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steezyshit
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Thank I felt the same for tge split screen but my brother liked it aha
Jul 29 2013 9:16PM
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buttrapinpirate
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Pretty good stuff. I liked the color temp of the video and stuff it gave a good warm summer feel. My only critique has nothing to do with the actual film, just more that the athletes losing their snapback every shot kinda bugged me. Like either pin it down or take it off. I doubt it bugs most people, but I tended to lose focus of the actual film and more started to wonder why they had hats even on if they were only going to come off every time they landed or threw down anything bigger than a flat 3. But that's probably me sounding like your grandpa. Still a sick video
Jul 29 2013 9:24PM
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steezyshit
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^ahaha I knew someone would see it but its mostly to not have our hair in the face ! Thanks for the critique I apreciate it !
Jul 29 2013 9:34PM
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Z-Juice
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It felt like there wasn't really a good flow throughout the edit. Too many subtle distractions like the split-screen feature (which might've been better if it was used longer), the hat flying off, the frequent slow-mo or in some cases sped-up clips, and changing angles too often never really allowed the edit to get into a rhythm where it was easy to focus on each person's variety of tricks/progression.

I appreciated the multiple angles, creativity, and solid filming. The tricks were high quality which is aIways helps of course. So I just wasn't too fond of the almost constant switching of angles basically.
Jul 30 2013 11:25AM
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Antdowg
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I got the same bug with my hat!

I really liked the video and the actions, but you should try to do different grabs that surprise us..
For example the gap to this little roof was my favorite moment!

And what a good spot!

ps:Sorry form my bad english i'm from france.


Aug 9 2013 5:09PM
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