First music video. Thoughs?

i honestly wasn't a huge fan of it. the colors were a little too greenish. some of the shots looked a bit overexposed and the green tint really showed in the highlights. i thought the shot of him up on the mountain was really awkward. the framing was a bit weird for the space he was in.

I'm no expert but to me, a music video should portray the general attitude of the song. Your song was upbeat, angry, and a bit hardcore. The video on the other hand, was slow moving, nice, and chill. He could have been singing an acoustic song about summer and the video would fit.
For what it was, the video was put together nicely. I just think it lacked creativity. Every shot was just him rapping to himself in a different setting. Throw some scenes in there that aren't just close ups on him rapping. That gets boring pretty quickly.
Also, that green tint was pretty distracting. I can see how you could be trying to make it an effect, but it's just not quite right. Either go big or go home there because when you just leave it like that it leaves the viewer wondering if it was intentional or not.

One last thing: damn that guy was hard to listen to. I'm not a fan of rap but that guy was exceptionally bad.

i have taken notice to the green tint in most of the shots and will re edit them and have a new one up tomorrow also the order is just going to have to stay it wasnt anything super serious just dipping my feet in the water to see how i could do with something like this it was mostly directed by him i just helped covey the idea for it to the camera he would say a jump off point and i would take it from there which isnt the best way to shoot something like this but next time i shoot one it will be directed a bit more and possibly broken down so that it can be done shot by shot and fit everything a lot better

we saw your mics shadow many times, the framing was off, the guy was bad, really bad.


I am usually helpfull but his singing just angered me.

It's really not my kind of music, but I'll try give some helpful comments.

alright lets see i fixed or tried to fix the greenish tent to it awhile ago second off looking back on this after a time it could have been done a whole lot better but trial and error now that i watch it the song is starting to get a bit annoying also addressing that he is a friend of mine we have know each other for quite a few years and was doing this as a favor not a paid job basically so this song wouldnt be my first choice to listen to but hoping you understand a bit more why it was chosen lets see what else...the order of the shots is a bit strange not a huge fan of it now that i look at them and the awkwardness of some of the shots is evident now such as the smoking shots but they were intended to be filler but didnt really fit i think thats it for the moment if i missed anything and anyone could point it out thatd be much appreciated and i will try and fix it

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