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What do you think? Critics needed!

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JibFrost
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Hey please watch this video and let me know what you think. you cant get better at editing without some critics pointing out your flaws.
Jul 20 2013 12:37AM
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EricCartman
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didn't even jump off anything that high
Jul 20 2013 12:48AM
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JibFrost
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i mean editing wise, what do you think?
Jul 20 2013 12:49AM
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youngdtay
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Cool it on the slowmo, less intro, lose a lot of any shots you think are borderline lame. Edit seems really bloated.
Jul 20 2013 12:51AM
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funk~
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It's more efficient to put this type of thing in Media and Arts man, you'll get more people who actually want to look at a video and give feedback.

Jul 20 2013 12:52AM
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JibFrost
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yeah i did i feel like not that many people look at those threads though :/ thanks for watching it though +k to all

Jul 20 2013 12:55AM
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LoathesRaisins
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Certainly not as much traffic, but the guys that browse in there know what they're talking about.
Jul 20 2013 1:02AM
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Sophistication.
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Editing wise, you should have taken out like 5 or six shots that were poorly done. The one where the guy on the tramp is jumping behind the tree and you can't see shit is irritating.

Anyway, it takes a lot of confidence to post this on a public forum, especially one like newschoolers and I appreciate that. Thanks for letting me in on your summer
Jul 20 2013 2:49AM
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Kazabazua
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I couldn't watch it, that song was terrible.
Jul 21 2013 11:41AM
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JibFrost
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thank you for all the constructive criticism +k to all
Jul 22 2013 3:53PM
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Wolfgang.
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I felt like it had a bit too much filler. Don't be afraid to make am edit shorter than the song, you can always find a way to cut the song. Other than that I thought it was good!
Jul 22 2013 4:20PM
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dvx100
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needs more cowbell
Jul 22 2013 4:21PM
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timmi
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mam made productions?
Jul 22 2013 4:25PM
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Peter.
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where was that waterfall, that place looks incredible
Jul 22 2013 4:47PM
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SamMcChesney
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this edit is terrible along with all the tricks in it
Jul 22 2013 9:20PM
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JibFrost
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its a local spot near Steamboat Springs in Colorado
Jul 24 2013 4:25PM
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act.resist
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Why do people even watch things like this?
Jul 24 2013 4:55PM
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Laurent.
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Why do people make two threads about this?

Jul 24 2013 4:56PM
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act.resist
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Why do people even make threads?
Jul 24 2013 4:59PM
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howlongcanausern
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Why do anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?
Jul 24 2013 5:02PM
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Laurent.
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Why do you cite 4chan?
Jul 24 2013 5:04PM
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lineskier10
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way too much slow mo, was there anything that wasnt? and do cooler shit off cliffs
Jul 24 2013 5:04PM
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Kirklife
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I would cut out a lot of the attempted artsy close-up transition shots. Unless you have a nicer camera with more selective focus, they look somewhat silly.
Jul 24 2013 6:50PM
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