Replying to Longboard Edit Critique?

So this is the first draft of a sponsor edit for a friend of mine who asked me to make it for him. We're gonna get more shots when he gets back from a trip to Germany, but I want to get an idea of what I should change. It's a sponsor edit so I put as little b-roll in as I felt comfortable with and kept it to the skating

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