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Longboard Edit Critique?

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Forcillo
Posts: 3801 - Karma: 3,580
So this is the first draft of a sponsor edit for a friend of mine who asked me to make it for him. We're gonna get more shots when he gets back from a trip to Germany, but I want to get an idea of what I should change. It's a sponsor edit so I put as little b-roll in as I felt comfortable with and kept it to the skating

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Jul 5 2013 11:47PM
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bunnies.
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Definately good riding. One change I would make is changing the initial shot of him walking. It kinda comes off as immature and most companies would not want to sponsor someone that is a punk not that that one little shot is enough to make the company think that but just to be on the safe side I would change that. And maybe add in some likeflat ground tricks like shuvits and big spins
Jul 6 2013 12:01AM
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Forcillo
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Good advice, thanks man. I'll change up that shot for sure. And yeah the freestylele's what he wants to focus on when he gets back along with bigger toesides. Thanks for the advice
Jul 6 2013 12:05AM
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bunnies.
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The big slides are really sick im a bigfan of those
Jul 6 2013 12:06AM
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cwphoto
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that was really dope! i wish i could hold out my standies like that.

only things i might say is to add some variation to the shots, as a lot of the stand ups kinda start to look the same. it was great skating, great edit bro!
Jul 7 2013 2:03PM
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Forcillo
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Completely remade the whole thing. So much happier with it.

Jul 31 2013 11:44PM
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