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Critique my last edit?

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Film.
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Open to all feedback. Bash it as hard as you want just give me reasons on why you didn't like it or did like it.
Jul 5 2013 4:39PM
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robotdna
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The slomo at 3:10 seemed a bit much for your framerate: you may want to twixtor that one.

Pan was a little odd, having the most the camera sound on the left and most the music on the right, but if that's what you want it's unique I suppose.

Overall, I liked it. Nicely done.
Jul 5 2013 5:19PM
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Film.
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Jul 5 2013 11:08PM
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Film.
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Heres the HD vimeo link which looks a lot better.
Jul 6 2013 12:32AM
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Mitchell.
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Yeah the slow-mo was definitely too much, twixtor could help but be careful and dont over-do the frame rate you shot at

I dont know why you put the talking clip in a 1:20 of him saying lets get 6 off, when he goes and does 450 out.

Other than that it was interesting, some shots really worked and it had a good feel.
Jul 6 2013 12:37AM
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Film.
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Bump, still really looking for things that could have been better, also anyone know any way to fix the dead cat from coming into shot?
Jul 7 2013 8:49PM
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MLeone
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just zoom a lil and make sure its pushed all the way back. Overall I like the edit man, good work. Didnt watch the whole video but from skimming I'd say get some shots that are skiing related but that aren't skiing, they'll add to the edit. I also really didnt dig the font, but that's all preference. Great job man!
Jul 7 2013 9:54PM
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Film.
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bump
Dec 2 2013 10:55PM
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cogan13run_ski
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I think that there is a bit too much black in between each shot. It kinda gets boring watching the screen go blank after each trick. Shots looked good to me though. It's a good starting piece and solid work so far.
Dec 3 2013 11:12AM
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