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I guess i'll ask for and edit critique

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binturong-qwerty
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title says it all
im on mobile right now so i'll embed as soon as i get to my laptop

https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/644256.0/Noah-Cutler-12-13-shots?c=11&t=6
Jun 28 2013 9:44AM
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a.bott
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That's not an edit
Jun 29 2013 7:15AM
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MartianMan
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The skiing in this vid is actually pretty good, and I loved the closeup on the skis. You have the basics, the bare minimum for an edit, though. If you added more footage, some music, and a little lifestyle footy, it would be good to go and would get a lot more views.
Jun 29 2013 5:56PM
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binturong-qwerty
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how about now?
Jul 1 2013 12:44AM
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MartianMan
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Loads better, looks great. Easier to watch for sure. The only thing I would do would be cut out some of the white noise from your footy (just mute it) and steady up the camera with a tripod or a stabilizer (you can get those for like $25 on eBay). Other than that, nice job.
Jul 1 2013 12:59AM
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binturong-qwerty
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thanks man
Jul 1 2013 8:49AM
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One.2
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Jumps?
Jul 2 2013 11:39PM
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