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Messing around with transitions and audio, critique me please! +k

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slc_utahboiii
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Filmed with Canon T2i, Sigma 10-20mm, Canon 50mm
Edited with Final Cut Pro

Thoughts please!
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Nature Edit from Switch Up Productions on Vimeo.

A quick edit trying some new transitions and use of background audio!


Jun 15 2013 1:08AM
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tomPietrowski
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I actually liked that. Good editing overall
Jun 15 2013 6:37AM
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slc_utahboiii
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thanks!
Jun 15 2013 10:27AM
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goodiepocket
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love it! nice work.
Jun 15 2013 10:29AM
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slc_utahboiii
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thanks guys, any specific things you liked?
Jun 15 2013 10:58AM
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SSteezle
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very nice
Jun 15 2013 11:17AM
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.qzyxya
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I liked the constant backgruond audio with the birds chirping, and the sound of the auto focus was pretty cool too. Sick overall.
Jun 15 2013 11:42AM
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buttrapinpirate
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You just proved the point that even when you don't have anything to shoot, you still do. That was fucking legit haha
Jun 15 2013 1:37PM
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EvanHemps
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That was filthy
Jun 15 2013 2:41PM
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slc_utahboiii
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Thanks fellas, just tryin some new stuff out!
Jun 15 2013 3:39PM
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WiredBrain
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That was awesome!
Jun 15 2013 6:57PM
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hugopeckham
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That was tight! Wish I had something I didn't like for some constructive criticism, but you got me beat.
Jun 16 2013 7:41AM
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slc_utahboiii
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Haha thanks for the love ns, any thoughts about stuff to change?
Jun 16 2013 10:48AM
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.jack.
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This is really dope dude. makes me want to try some audio and transition stuff too. keep up the good work!
Jun 16 2013 2:14PM
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slc_utahboiii
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Thanks a lot man! Its really fun actually
Jun 16 2013 2:17PM
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Downtofilm
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That was cool
Jun 16 2013 2:23PM
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Shredability
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I liked it, very nice sound
Jun 16 2013 4:39PM
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gravel
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Really nice! Loved the transitions and most of the audio design. Only thing I could say is that I didn't like the continuity of the bird chirps. With a change in visuals I would have liked to hear a change in audio. I think it better impacts the shift of the environment in the mind of the viewers.
Jun 16 2013 4:55PM
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slc_utahboiii
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I know what you mean, I could have added some different background audio as the clips transitioned, thanks!
Jun 16 2013 5:09PM
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Mitchell.
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i dont know how you made that work but you did.
Jun 17 2013 10:35AM
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juicedrummer11
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or just sort of fade them out like you are re-focusing your attention onto something else and you sort of forget about the birds, then bring them back when you get to the same scene again. that was tight tho. really enjoyed it
Jun 17 2013 4:31PM
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slc_utahboiii
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cool! great feedback thanks homies
Jun 17 2013 6:03PM
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.jack.
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was this filmed with the 50mm 1.4 or 1.8?
Jun 17 2013 8:57PM
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slc_utahboiii
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1.8, ahah I wish I could afford the 1.4
Jun 18 2013 12:43AM
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