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New series. Thoughts?

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James.Jenkins
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One Hour with Graham from FAMILY FILMS on Vimeo.

Spent an hour filming Graham Foster at the pool on a cloudy day. More hours coming soon. Enjoy!

Shot on T3i and Flycam Nano

Jun 10 2013 10:16PM
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Nate_Doggg
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I really thought it was great. A nice little video, good cinematography, and nothing stood out as too rough to me.
Jun 10 2013 11:45PM
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gravel
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Ehhh

Titling was good, colors were pretty decent

but

Intro radio thing was a blatant ripoff of Saga TV, a lot of the shot composition was poor, you were framing him too low and you wouldn't get the pool at all, song didn't work well in that it had a cutoff fade, etc.

Could be better.
Jun 11 2013 12:08AM
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James.Jenkins
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Alright word thanks guys. Gavin I'll keep the composition in mind for sure. Thanks a lot.
Jun 11 2013 8:41AM
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gravel
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Dope, and I hope I don't sound like a douchebag. Seriously though, make more, make a ton more, you get better with practice, and you're well on your way.
Jun 11 2013 2:27PM
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James.Jenkins
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Nah man I appreciate it for sure. I've seen your videos on Vimeo, they're tight. Hopefully I'm making like 10 or so of these "one hour with" videos, so I'll be getting plenty of practice.
Jun 11 2013 7:53PM
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