Critiques please

i'm not gonna lie that was weird and pretty bad overall

Of course, we had some restrictions as to what we could do as its for school, but what exactly aucked ass

the transitions were typical imovie transitions (never something to use), there was constant camera noise and grunting behind the camera. the story line was a bit out there too. lastly, it could have been shortened up a lot.

and actually the actors/narrators didn't sound like they were taking it seriously but that part is out of your control.

could be made into a fairly good piece with a little more time and a cast that isn't "too cool" to play anything but a G

I don't mean to sound like an ass, but those are some things to think about in the future. I hope it helped!

Yeah its my first time filming and editing on a serious level. It's a gothic film for my lit class(mandatory) and the noise levels are difficult because i only have a point and shoot that gets decent footage. The story has to follow certain guidelines which make it relatively wacky and silly and the actors are the group i worked with so its a bunch of people who dont give a fuck about acting...I'm reworking it with some minor edits right now but considering its due today i dont have a ton of time.

Thanks for the help!

word yeah thats always a bitch of a situation.

no problem dude, by the way- still chuckling at your username