Replying to *Non-Skiing* Critique my Documentary?

Paving Paradise: A Longboarding Documentary from Alex Forcillo on Vimeo.

Also please go to Vimeo and watch in HD as the SD version is trash.

This is the first video I've made that isn't an edit. I tried to interweave a story component and give people a good background on the sport, as well as keep it interesting with good action shots over the voices. Accepting any and all critiques. Thanks!