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Another edit critique +K for everyone

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homestar
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I posted this in the "Critique My Edit Thread" but got no response so I'll try again here.

I filmed and edited most of this last night but I think it came out pretty well. I just realized that I forgot to cut the background noise out of the first clip but other than that +k for all critiques.



May 12 2013 2:08PM
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homestar
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Thanks!
May 12 2013 6:07PM
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homestar
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bump
May 13 2013 9:21PM
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SkierPT
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Pretty sweet. I don't know if you were going for the unstable shot look but a few shots were a bit shaky/jerky
May 14 2013 2:07PM
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Flame
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i liked it, i especially liked the moon clip at the end. only issue was that some of the shots could be a little smoother. maybe tripod the camera for those, or perhaps edit the stabilization in post? maybe another rig of some sort (glidecam etc) other than that very enjoyable edit
May 15 2013 4:12PM
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homestar
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Yeah a glidecam is definitely at the top of my list of things to buy. Thanks for the feedback.
May 15 2013 5:44PM
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Balbertt
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Very nice, cinematic in a way.
May 15 2013 8:44PM
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DorianF
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i really liked your use of depth of field, looked very professional. some of the shots were a bit shaky, but that seems to have been adressed by other users, overall nice chill cinematic edit. i liked it
May 16 2013 3:00PM
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EASYZ
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This is a great edit!! especially because it looks like you filmed it in your yard...
May 16 2013 9:05PM
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homestar
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Haha yeah dude I don't have much to film now that the mountain's closed. We need to go film in glacier park or something soon.
May 16 2013 9:18PM
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.qzyxya
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Wow that was actually really sick. What lens/camera did you use? Those lens flares looked awesome
May 16 2013 9:20PM
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homestar
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Thanks! I used a Panasonic TM700.
May 16 2013 9:28PM
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