Don't use the same angle a lot(especially in a row).
use your best clips, most people won't get enough footage to make an exclusively urban edit, IMO yours is no exception.
There's some cool stuff in it, but there's a lot of stuff which I feel isn't that impressive(for you guys), so it could have just been skipped and made shorter.
some of those guys would look a bit better if they didn't wave their arms around so much too.
watched it earlier and that's all I remember sorry, I'll try watch it again in a bit.