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Critique my Edit please, +k for feedback!

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rubenl
Posts: 16 - Karma: 38
Hi I just started out filming, and this is my very first edit i made!
I know that I've made A lot of rookie mistakes, for example the snow is way to bright and there is no depth in it! (how do i fix this?)

This is what i was using:

Canon 7D

Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 III (I know cheap lens, hope to have a better lens soon!!)

Glidecam
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Don't sugar coat me!! I did this little project to learn, so every feedback is welcome!!!

https://vimeo.com/63175570


Thank you all in advance, for the Feedback and you'r Time!
May 5 2013 1:00PM
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homestar
Posts: 2124 - Karma: 4,197
Looks really good for a first edit. Just a few things -

- Looks like its over exposed. That's why the snow is so bright and mostly just solid white in some shots.
- At :52 I would have cut it away a little earlier before the camera moved.
- The audio from your videos sounded kind quiet and weak. I'm not sure why though.

May 5 2013 1:10PM
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