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Season edit - feedback?

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eivindaaholtet
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Hello!

I just dropped my season edit, and I wondered if I could cet some creative feedback!

What can I do to make the edit better? What can I do on the editing side and what can I do on the skiing side?

Here is the edit:
https://vimeo.com/65055468

I hope you can provide some feedback, it would have been a great help and I would have been much thankful for it!
May 2 2013 4:40PM
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Miomo
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I just scrolled down to check for age claims. It was going good until I caught the two small numbers "1" and "5" and came back here.
To sum up:
It was terrible. Just terrible.
May 2 2013 4:57PM
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eivindaaholtet
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Last time I checked it didn`t stand 15 there.
May 2 2013 5:04PM
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Miomo
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Editing the description, much?
You wienie.
May 2 2013 5:06PM
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Afterbang.no
Posts: 1105 - Karma: 4,297
Mike Hornbeck edit w/ ageclaim:

Mike Hornbeck from Nathon Jepkema on Vimeo.



Just for the fun of it.. I alredy stated my stand on the ageclaim thing...



But anyway! I'm going to watch your edit now

May 2 2013 5:14PM
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Afterbang.no
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Skiing, was good, you've got the basics, now just slow down a little and start focusing more on not waving arms to mush and hold you grabs longer!

I can't say mush about editing, just, watch more edits get inspired, and take time while editing, you'll get better! Post this in M&A forum next time by the way! Heia Norge!
May 2 2013 5:23PM
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eivindaaholtet
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Thanks for the feedback!
May 2 2013 5:29PM
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Toaster-Tony
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Nice bag of tricks! I liked how you were always changing direction and throwing a good amount of switch tricks in there as well. Just work on holding those grabs a little longer and keep throwing down on rails so you gain confidence and land a little cleaner. Overall pretty good, keep it up man.
May 2 2013 5:32PM
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eivindaaholtet
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Thanks!!
May 2 2013 5:36PM
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