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ALaw
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Austin Lawrence 2012/13 from Austin Lawrence on Vimeo.



First season out in Utah, and first time ever using premiere. Let me know what you think
Apr 29 2013 6:02PM
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Mag
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that was sweet(partially), loved the crashes at the end, I had a feeling that rail crash was gonna happen haha.

The skiing was awesome, lots of variety and all really good.

The filming was nothing special, but you're pretty limited.

the editing was bad, you shouldn't have those black bars around it, you have compression artifacts, you kept sound where you shouldn't have, your exposure isn't very consistent and it was all kind of thrown together at the beginning.

Regardless it was still enjoyable.
Apr 29 2013 6:50PM
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ALaw
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Thanks for the honesty! Black bars were a mistake that I noticed after uploading :( What are compression artifacts? Haven't heard that term before.
Apr 29 2013 7:00PM
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Mag
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No point in being nice haha, I'd much rather get as much help as possible.

Yeah, sometimes things like that happen if you're new, no worries, you'll not do it next time. Always watch your video before you upload it just to see if there's any problems.

Look at the clip at 1:01, I presume that's because you set the bit rate too low.
Apr 29 2013 7:14PM
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