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Internship edit crituqe- no skiing

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jibcrew1
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Shot for a under armor internship filmed it edited it, any advice for something next time would be nice.


Apr 29 2013 8:57AM
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Mag
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If you're applying for an internship it needs to be flawless.

Too juddery, either use a tripod/do better with the glidecam.


Apr 29 2013 9:18AM
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jibcrew1
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im not applying the person in it is and if you could point out where it was "juddery" that would be helpful
Apr 29 2013 9:48AM
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m3owzza
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your glidecam work is pretty good! but you can tell when you "jerk" it back and forth when he is talking in the batting cage

also when you are sitting with him and he is on his phone, you can easily tell that you are holding it yourself and not on a tripod because it "wiggles" back and forth ever so slightly
Apr 29 2013 10:54AM
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jibcrew1
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thanks and when he's on the phone its on a glidecam and i was just holding it as steady as i can and pulled the focus with my hand
Apr 29 2013 11:54AM
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m3owzza
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thats the problem. as steady as you can and actual steady are two WAY different things
Apr 29 2013 12:29PM
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jibcrew1
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i knew it wasnt perfect but it was the best time he did the speech and the most usable shot i might add that it had to be 40 seconds long or else i would have opened up the shots to better and more movement
Apr 29 2013 1:19PM
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Jwenz
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Like its already been stated...glidecam needs work. minor movements are okay but you were shaking like a dogs tail back and forth. also the audio could have been more crisp
Apr 29 2013 1:51PM
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Mag
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Yeah I thought the audio was questionable, thought it was just my speakers
Apr 29 2013 1:51PM
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CrotchKiller
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colors were weird during the library scene. His voice was wayyyyyy too quite and the song was too much.
Apr 29 2013 2:01PM
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jibcrew1
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bump
Apr 30 2013 3:09PM
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FreeskiThe603
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i think the ending should be a little less sudden. something as simple as a fade out should fix that though. im talking about where it goes from video to credits. just throw in a nice little transition there and i like it. great work other than that
Apr 30 2013 11:00PM
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jibcrew1
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as said before it had to be forty seconds i just added the credits but we are shooting another one today and will take all options into consideration
May 1 2013 8:34AM
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