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Help With A PunchLine (Writting Rap)

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Wadsworth
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Hey guys so im writting this rap right now and its about school. Iv been trying to think of a good punchline for like 2 hours and I cant think of anything and its killing me. Can you guys help? Any ideas?

This might be in the wrong forum but Im trying to do this right now and non ski gabber gets the most attention.

+k if you help!

Thanks!!
Apr 20 2013 10:49AM
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Vino
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Whaddup I'm stay easy Prod

Get at me wit yo buds

Bam
Apr 20 2013 10:55AM
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.AR6rider.
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Yo, yo, yoooo, fellow high school homies! I'm a shitty, white, wannabe rapper with no talent, so don't listen to a single thing I have to say and maybe I'll eventually realize how stupid I am and give this up.
Apr 20 2013 11:02AM
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Wadsworth
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?
Apr 20 2013 11:03AM
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Wadsworth
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Not a wannabe at all. Its something that I have always loved.
Apr 20 2013 11:04AM
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Mr.Mitten
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This video might help, I'm on mobile so someone embedding would be greatly appreciated http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XK8zINzcbKA
Apr 20 2013 11:05AM
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Spinoza
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School is fun
I love my classmates
My teacher is nice
hand homework in on the due date
Math science geo math
Penis vagina cock semen
Apr 20 2013 11:06AM
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.AR6rider.
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Legit. As. Fuck.
Apr 20 2013 11:11AM
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Wadsworth
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That was a school preject.

Now this video is my real music.


Apr 20 2013 11:15AM
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.AR6rider.
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Hahaha thank you for proving my point. That was fucking terrible.
Apr 20 2013 11:20AM
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987321654hgfd
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Oh lord. You will regret this.
Apr 20 2013 11:22AM
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KingGeedorah
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What exactly is a punch line in rap? Since its for school, just do fuggdacops, fuggdacops, fuggdacops, like i fuggedyamoms. /thread
Apr 20 2013 11:26AM
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Kazabazua
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Face palm. >_<
Apr 20 2013 11:26AM
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FLBP
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Fuck the haters, this sum lcp shit
Apr 20 2013 11:39AM
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S.Ki
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I do Math you do Meth?!
Apr 20 2013 11:41AM
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Wadsworth
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Thanks for the feedback! Im sorry that your not into my style of music.
Apr 20 2013 11:42AM
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Tacocat
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"ayo u faggot, u gay okay?"
Apr 20 2013 11:47AM
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Wadsworth
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Thats what I always say.
Apr 20 2013 12:02PM
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SteezoSaurus
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A great man once said...


"Shake your body like a baby born addicted to crack."














BOOM.
Apr 20 2013 12:40PM
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Bogs
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Your skill is the problem, not your style of music
Apr 20 2013 3:19PM
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ski.cats
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get learned, NCMI



Apr 20 2013 3:54PM
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Wadsworth
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Now that was terrible
Apr 20 2013 5:59PM
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-AM-
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Cmon guys it wasn't THAT bad.
Apr 20 2013 6:01PM
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-AM-
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That was far worse
Apr 20 2013 6:02PM
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Rafiki
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drake, lil wayne and justin bieber called, they want their style back. and their autotunes
Apr 20 2013 6:03PM
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Wadsworth
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Ours was not autotuned at all.
Apr 20 2013 6:51PM
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Mr.Luke
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What's the teacher into?...Corporal punishment

Does she like anal? Yeah man drenched in cum and shit

Oh shit oh damn this teacher's in town

More like down town where she's getting her mouth brown

Here's a bio lesson for the less intelligent you see

Some product of meiosis shoots right up in to her pussy

What's it gonna be? A major polar body?

Fuck condoms it's her future, guess what's not? ME.



I got bored. It's really bad but fun to write.
Apr 20 2013 7:01PM
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Rafiki
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your voice is just naturally that nasally? haha
Apr 21 2013 2:51AM
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E__
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Tell the fuckhead on the right to wear his properly or I'll beat his ass.
Apr 21 2013 3:02AM
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