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"A Season" season edit critique please!

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slc_utahboiii
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Please let me know what you guys on M/A think! Thanks!


A Season from Switch Up Productions on Vimeo.

A season of shots and fun with the Switch Up Productions crew in Michigan.

Filming : Stefan Erickson
Additional Filming : Doug Kubiak, Jeep Wanty, and Connor Genther.

Editing : Stefan Erickson
via : FCP

Camera : Canon T2i
: 18-55mm, Sigma 10-20mm, Canon 50mm, Rokinon Fisheye 8mm, and 55-200mm.
: Glidecam 2000 Pro, Velbon tripod and Video Rode Mic.

Skiers : Jeep Wanty, Doug Kubiak, Taylor Cronin, Andrew Bickley, and Stefan Erickson.

Song : Leaf (Instrumental)
By : Clams Casino

Enjoy!

Apr 14 2013 8:17PM
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SkiThe603
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Sick dude, entire way through!!!!!!!!
Apr 14 2013 8:46PM
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slc_utahboiii
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Thanks man! anything you would change?
Apr 14 2013 9:06PM
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homestar
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That was really sick! I liked almost everything about it. There were just a couple things I would have changed.

- The first shot was a little shaky. It's really not a big deal but I probably wouldn't have started out with that shot.

- I didn't really like the shot of the clouds at 2:49. The sun was setting in the shot before then it was like it went back to daytime.

The whole thing seemed really Stept-like but in a good way. I definitely liked it.
Apr 14 2013 9:45PM
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slc_utahboiii
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-I agree the first shot was a little shaky
-the two sun shots were the sam shot just cut ahead to the others, but yah I understand what you mean by night and day sort of effect
-Stept is definitely my favorite crew out there so I'm not surprised I leaned that way visually. I definitely should develop my own style though haha!
Apr 14 2013 9:51PM
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Mkvackay
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that was pretty sick man, cool seeing some local talent film and skiing wise from gr

-crop was pretty good, although a few times the framing didn't work

-bickley's faceplant haha

-was that the actual lakeside rail you guys hit?

can't wait to see some more stuff next year from ya!
Apr 14 2013 11:03PM
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will_powder
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Only thing I would say is to keep the urban shots clean. IE move all your shovels, skis, boards and car out of the shot.
Apr 14 2013 11:50PM
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slc_utahboiii
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Faceplant was priceless, lakeside is like 5 blocks from my house!

Thanks man!
Apr 15 2013 7:33AM
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slc_utahboiii
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ahh I see what ya mean, first year doing real urban so we are getting into it but I know what ya mean, thanks!
Apr 15 2013 7:33AM
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slc_utahboiii
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bump
Apr 15 2013 12:45PM
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McFellon
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It looked really clean overall. The 2 things I would change are 1) the first shot of the gap at 1:56 wasn't all that cool since it was just a strait air, and 2) I got bored of the song.
Apr 15 2013 10:52PM
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slc_utahboiii
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Okay thansk for the feedback man! i also think the song kinda got boring after a little
Apr 16 2013 7:26AM
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