Replying to Critique: The ender part in this years urban movie

First year I have really filmed urban and pretty happy wit how it turned out

Teaser:

Stuck in Steamboat Teaser from Jacob Marshall on Vimeo.

Ending Part
Password: shawn

Shawn Rough Cut from Jacob Marshall on Vimeo.

-Still a rough cut and still planning on changing a few shots(especially a few of the b-roll shots.)
-Wish i had at least some glide-cam shots but i was absolutely paranoid that i was going to screw the shot up haha
-No sound or color has been done yet.
-Really wish I had enough footy to finish out the song but it just didn't work out

Let me know what you think!