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Commercial critique - first time

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BA.berger
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Skeikampen reklamefilm 2013 - vinter (versjon 1) from BackYard Productions on Vimeo.

Made this video for the ski resort, what do you think?
Password: skeikampen2013

Thanks!
Apr 10 2013 8:17AM
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BA.berger
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trying again, K+ for all critisism or comments!
Apr 11 2013 12:50PM
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boomie
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I liked the flow of it, maybe try to color correct more though to have the shots match up
Apr 11 2013 4:04PM
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buttrapinpirate
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first...

+k for Two Door Cinema Club,


But yeah great commercial! As said above, color correction to match stuff would be nice (like the difference between shots around 45 sec), but other than that, it's really good! Maybe also duck the audio a little earlier, like around when you switch from the night shot to the logo.
Apr 11 2013 10:22PM
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BA.berger
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Thanks!
Ill try to correct the colors and that audio thing!
Anything else?
Apr 13 2013 5:19PM
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Mag
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0:48, the 2 black bars fuckup and keep wiggling.

1:18 there's some weird compression artifacts there.
Apr 13 2013 6:34PM
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gusestomp
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2 door cinema club.. yes.

+k
Apr 13 2013 7:38PM
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BA.berger
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haha
Apr 15 2013 4:49PM
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Mar-O
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I liked it allot actually, but I didn't really like the shot of the cafeteria inside at 0.55, I think it was to basic with one pan shot from inside witch makes it seem like it the cafeteria is full and that you could have done that part allot better.
But overall I really liked the shots and the flow.
Apr 16 2013 2:39PM
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.qzyxya
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Apr 16 2013 2:43PM
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BA.berger
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skeikampen presentasjonsfilm - vinter from Bjørn Are Berger on Vimeo.


New version here, unfortunately with another song for you Two door cinema club fans.
Ctitques appreciated!
Apr 28 2013 5:03PM
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rudedog41
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Definitely enjoyed the first one from a non technical perspective, even despite the things magnus pointed out...It was probably just because the first one had lyrics, idk but it made it feel like it was going somewhere. The other one just kind of felt repetitive because of the song.
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