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***The Infamous Krew.... Tryin to become more heard for our music***

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Wadsworth
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Hows it goin my dudes !! So my friend and I love music more than anything. We decided that we should start writting some tracks. We are loving it like crazy, so much fun. Yes we are new to writing out own stuff but let me know what you all think. We know not everyone is going to like it but please let me know what you all think. And if you guys like what you think we are doing thanks so much and spread the word about us because we are trying our hardest to go as far as we can go. Thanks so much again !!!


Mar 13 2013 11:01PM
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panojibber.
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Not bad man, sounds like you guys put a lot of work into this. Can't really comment on the lyrics because I don't listen to a ton of hip hop, but the flow was definitely there.

Second guys vocals sounded a little off, sounded like you recorded it in a bad space, but maybe thats just me. Reverb was maybe a little overdone on all the vocals.

NS is probably going to hate on this so much but I think you guys should definitely keep making tunes.
If you guys have a soundcloud post it up, I'd definitely follow you. Always cool to see what some other NSers are up to musically.
Mar 13 2013 11:20PM
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Wadsworth
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Hey thanks so much man! We really appreciate it. We do have a soundcloud also !! heres the link

https://soundcloud.com/ryan-wadsworth-1
Mar 13 2013 11:30PM
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Wadsworth
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Also please make sure to subscribe
Mar 14 2013 8:48AM
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TijmenDal
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Flow was nice.
I HATE those kind of beats, but that's just me (you know, the smooth, slick west coast beats. I'm more of a 'raw' east coast style kinda guy).

Keep it up, that was a really good start. Just update this topic with all your new stuff coming out!
Mar 14 2013 11:30AM
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Wadsworth
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Thanks so much man!
Mar 14 2013 12:44PM
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p-fo
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Hahaha Ryan is part of a rap group now. Awesome.
Mar 15 2013 6:13AM
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Wadsworth
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Heck yeah dude. Haha. It's to fun.
Mar 15 2013 11:00AM
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Wadsworth
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New one. This one was just me.
Mar 15 2013 3:52PM
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Wadsworth
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Bump
Mar 25 2013 9:02PM
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sarajuana
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dont listen to much hip-hop but gotta admit, this is good shit ! good job. im huge on following people on soundcloud so that i will do !
Mar 25 2013 9:52PM
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Wadsworth
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Hey thank you so much!!!
Mar 25 2013 10:45PM
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bo0b
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Not bad, but a few points of constructive criticism
-work on your flow, it sort of felt like this was your first take and you did it and didn't polish it, try and make it more natural
- The third rappers subject was a braggadocios type flow, but he wasn't sounding confident, and if you're basically just flexing you have to be confident.
- The second guy isn't saying anything, he's just trying to rhyme as much as possible, and saying "He's white but he can rap" isn't original, there's so many white rappers that it doesn't matter. and J Cookies sounds stupid, no offense.
-Try and work on your rhymes a bit, some were kind of played out, and just not that awesome.

That really wasn't bad though, I've seen A LOT worse first attempts. I didn't mind it at all, and it sounds like it took a lot of work, the beat was really well done, and the vocals sounded crisp, not like they were recorded on some shitty laptop mic.
Mar 25 2013 11:58PM
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hollygrove
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J Cookie is getting hydrated? I'm in!
Mar 26 2013 12:11AM
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Wadsworth
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Thanks so much for the feedback!!!
Mar 26 2013 7:20AM
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Wadsworth
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Apr 2 2013 10:04PM
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Wadsworth
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HERES OUR LATEST SONG!!!! BEST ONE YET I THINK!


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