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BA.berger
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Winter in Hafjell from BackYard Productions on Vimeo.

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Mar 10 2013 7:22PM
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_RNS_
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I liked it a lot. My only issue with it was that you cut off the skiers head and feet most of the time. If you shot a little wider, you could have easily corrected that. It was great other than that.
Mar 10 2013 7:49PM
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BA.berger
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I couldtn see that I cut of heads or feet often, I tried to have some close-up shots so they were supposed to be that way, but on some shots I understand what you mean..
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Mar 11 2013 4:25PM
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Belzebub
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Fy faen dere har utvikla dere, både kjøremessig og filmmessig! Dere klarer å gjennomføre den litt mørke looken med glans, sangen passer perfekt. Hvor gamle er dere egentlig?
Mar 11 2013 6:13PM
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j.benziger
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The colors were sweet in this video I really liked them.
Mar 11 2013 7:58PM
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SacZiplock
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Really pleasant to watch ! Good vibe, on point. But yea sometimes you are a bit too close ,i mean , too often . We have to see that its intentional and we will not see it if you are too close from the subject too many times..and i also noticed that sometimes you should cut a bit faster after some tricks. I mean we see some of the jump landings for like 3-4 seconds . Thats just my two cents but i realy liked it ! Park looks dope too good job
Mar 11 2013 11:59PM
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connorfitz
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I really liked this edit nice song too. The only thing, like said above. is that the shots were a bit zoomed in and idk if it was just me but it kinda looked like a couple of the shots were a little out of focus. But nice solid tricks and it was a good edit.
Mar 12 2013 12:40AM
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BA.berger
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Thanks for great feedback, Ill try to not get so close to the rider next time! And yeah, I also think some of the shots was a little out of focus, I have to get better at that,

Og til deg norske oppi der, Tusen takk!:) Alle er født i 98 utenom han på thumbnail bildet, han er 97!
Mar 12 2013 9:31AM
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MikeRonzitti
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I really liked the edit like some other people have said great vibe to it. To go off what other doods are saying about choppin heads and feet, if you invest in a fisheye lens you can get as close as you want to and not chop heads.
Mar 12 2013 4:22PM
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SacZiplock
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maybe more a wide angle lens . a fisheye lens isnt really the best for skiing... go for the tokina 11-16. one of the best imo
Mar 12 2013 4:28PM
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MikeRonzitti
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Yeah that too, any wide angle lens works. i film skating more often than skiing so a fisheye works better for me.
Mar 12 2013 4:34PM
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SacZiplock
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yea thats right , for skating its the best !
Mar 12 2013 4:43PM
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BA.berger
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Thanks for feedback!
I currently have a wide angle lens that works for me, so I dont need the tokina, maybe one beautiful day Ill buy it:)
Mar 13 2013 7:03PM
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