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Thoughts on my 2 newest edits. +k for good feedback

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Whaley
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Mar 4 2013 3:16PM
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Mitchell.
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First one
Pros:
Filming was pretty good overall
Color was really nice.
Video quality was good
Edit had some flow

Cons:
the skiing
The intro
Most of it was bails
0:58 NO!

Second one
Pros:
Quality was good again
Color was good
Flowed well
Skiing was better overall

Cons:
I didn't really like the OHH after the intro shots
0:44 seemed kinda cheesy
Short
Camera wasnt always smooth

Overall I enjoyed watching them, good job man!
Mar 4 2013 3:36PM
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SkierPT
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I liked them until everyone was on the kids dick for gapping the dfd rail.
Mar 4 2013 7:39PM
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Whaley
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Thanks for the feedback
Mar 4 2013 11:24PM
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Film.
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Dat was meee, rest assure you it was a joke.
Mar 4 2013 11:34PM
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homestar
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They were both pretty short but that wasn't a big issue. The first one had a few too many crashes. The second one was a lot better and had several sick shots. As mentioned above, I didn't really like what you did with the last shot. I didn't think it was the sickest shot so I don't know why you put so much focus on it. I would have been fine with the same idea (music cutting out and stuff) if it was with one of your other shots.

Overall, I thought they were both really good. Maybe you could combine the footage to make a slightly longer edit and cut out a few of the crashes.
Mar 4 2013 11:44PM
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SkierPT
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My meter was broken then lol. All id say is why not combine the 2 edits into 1 better one
Mar 5 2013 1:38PM
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Kimmler
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some of the shots were pretty good there just weren't enough of them. take out the clips where the skiier doesn't even make it to the end of the rail. second edit was a little better than the first though. you need more of the good footage, and ALOT less of the bad.
Mar 6 2013 5:22PM
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life_is_hood
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the illest
Mar 25 2013 10:01PM
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