Really professional looking and really good. i liked how in the beginning you had some non skiing shots in. There werent too many but werent too much. I liked how you used the lunch as a transition, that was really smart. I liked the CC but at sometimes, i thought it was too much.
I actually am in the process of really getting into editing and you seem to be the person to ask. i have a few questions of my own, i made a thread about it:
https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/forums/readthread/thread_id/736854/