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My Mid Season edit (feedback appreciated)

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LarryPowers
Posts: 332 - Karma: 138
So, here's my mid season edit I made with couple of my friends:



I'd like to hear feedback and know what I could do better! Good answers get +K
Feb 24 2013 3:18PM
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_RNS_
Posts: 172 - Karma: 736
Not bad. Personally I am not a fan of rap edits, but that is personal choice. One critique though is that because of the black and white style, while also being shot at night, I often lost the skier mid air because their clothes blended in with the sky. Also the follow shots were a little shaky.
Feb 24 2013 3:23PM
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cwillygood
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it was kind of hard to see some of the shots sense they were in the dark, im not a huge fan of black and white edits but felt it went nicely with the song
Feb 24 2013 5:37PM
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special-J
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nothing to say about the skiing, looks like you are killing it. But edit-wise, I would definitely not put night shots in black and white. Yes, the filming was pretty shaky and everything, but it seems like you are making the best of the camera you have. I would love to see your skiing filmed with some nicer equipment but for now, not bad.
Feb 24 2013 6:08PM
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*ninja*
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i cudnt c
Feb 24 2013 8:28PM
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Chubz.
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get rid of that vignette. It really makes things harder to see and it's kind of distraction. And as stated before the black and white doesn't go well with the night shots. But other than that it was good!
Feb 24 2013 8:35PM
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LarryPowers
Posts: 332 - Karma: 138
Thanks guys for the feedback! I'll be careful with the dark shots in the future
Feb 25 2013 12:19AM
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