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nbates
Posts: 16 - Karma: 14
Here's my edit that I put together after shooting all MLK weekend

https://vimeo.com/59986981

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Feb 24 2013 9:40AM
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SkiBum.
Posts: 3600 - Karma: 3,909
Video Section is ---->
Feb 24 2013 9:55AM
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NotGhood
Posts: 2809 - Karma: 1,255
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MiLK from Noah Bates on Vimeo.


Feb 24 2013 10:30AM
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SkiBum.
Posts: 3600 - Karma: 3,909
Not enough 270s and 450s out. Not enough open jackets.
Feb 24 2013 10:34AM
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tdollo
Posts: 3760 - Karma: 18,321
use a better song that hasnt been used in multiple edits
Feb 24 2013 10:37AM
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SloanKettering
Posts: 691 - Karma: 465
meh
Feb 24 2013 10:58AM
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pink_squid
Posts: 1188 - Karma: 368
MORE OPEN JACKETS

SHITS CLUTCH YO
Feb 24 2013 11:53AM
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Matt_T
Posts: 78 - Karma: 74
Zip up your jacket, you're going to catch a cold.
Feb 24 2013 12:03PM
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Turkelton
Posts: 2829 - Karma: 8,558
Not enough sag and wacka
Feb 24 2013 12:13PM
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Splice.
Posts: 1381 - Karma: -192
Can I sponsor you?
Feb 24 2013 12:29PM
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Afterbang.no
Posts: 1105 - Karma: 4,297
my god, it was that horrible!
Feb 24 2013 12:35PM
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Tacocat
Posts: 658 - Karma: 356
Open your jacket more
Feb 24 2013 12:55PM
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backwardsrider
Posts: 543 - Karma: 70
fuck off, use the video section.
Feb 24 2013 1:04PM
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edai
Posts: 4987 - Karma: 4,653
The only thing that was off was the use of shots involving frontside tricks. You had pretty much no front 2s off, and would it kill you to throw a front 4 in there?
Feb 24 2013 1:17PM
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PeeDog
Posts: 228 - Karma: 76
- It should have had more 2s and 4s out
- You should have used a even less popular song, like Coastin' or Sail
- You should have used more blur/ fade effects at the end of each shot
- You should open your jackets even more
- You should ALWAYS ignore the video section and post your edits directly to ski gabber (It gets your edit more recognized and gives you more positive and creative feedback)
Feb 24 2013 1:18PM
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BChaps1209
Posts: 1350 - Karma: 2,441
your edit is bad and you should feel bad
Feb 24 2013 1:22PM
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flying-ninja
Posts: 46 - Karma: 20
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Feb 24 2013 1:23PM
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MustBeMattyB
Posts: 495 - Karma: 2,147
I like all your transitions makes me feel like im fucked up
Feb 24 2013 1:28PM
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Thadius.Castle
Posts: 1436 - Karma: 250
you're the epitome of a twelve year old newschooler.
Feb 24 2013 1:54PM
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03gade
Posts: 856 - Karma: 3,263
you should hit puberty. and this is not the video section.
Feb 24 2013 4:15PM
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Seany.n
Posts: 459 - Karma: 467
could have summed it up in less than a minute, considering there were 4 different tricks repeated for 2 plus minutes
Feb 24 2013 4:18PM
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03gade
Posts: 856 - Karma: 3,263
if anyone wants to see op creepin in the bushes on 2 girls watch his "fall reel 2012"......future pedo alert.
Feb 24 2013 4:26PM
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nbates
Posts: 16 - Karma: 14
its a good thing a put it on ski gabber just to piss you guys off. looks like it worked
Feb 24 2013 7:06PM
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skibeest
Posts: 419 - Karma: 103
You would benefit from a different song choice, but other than that pretty good filming, quality, and of course skiing. Change up the song and it will be very good
Feb 24 2013 9:19PM
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03gade
Posts: 856 - Karma: 3,263
and who are you now.
Feb 24 2013 9:38PM
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suup
Posts: 1485 - Karma: 4,367
Different camera angles maybe a jump or too. Pretty solid tricks!
Feb 25 2013 12:25AM
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Kooky_Lukey
Posts: 1002 - Karma: 1,966
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Feb 25 2013 12:26AM
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bighomieflock
Posts: 2040 - Karma: 2,445
You must just be overflowing with joy and confidence that you pissed off some random internet people on newschoolers.
Feb 25 2013 12:28AM
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Ehball
Posts: 183 - Karma: 233
He's so happy, he and his friends are peeing in each others butts to celebrate.
Feb 25 2013 12:36AM
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Polar_Beer
Posts: 1515 - Karma: 228
obviously some kid that was in the edit.
Feb 25 2013 12:47AM
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03gade
Posts: 856 - Karma: 3,263
I grew up before internet bullying was a thing, and i know it can be a serious issue. but kid you brought this on yourself.Click for larger image
Feb 25 2013 2:04AM
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