Replying to New Edit- Cloud Cover & How to record the best audio?

1.This was my best edit so far... At least I think. Still looking for FEEDBACK though. Good Feedback is always appreciated on my end +K

2.I recently picked up a rode video mic w/ a dead cat. I filmed all my audio with dead cat on in the edit above. But when I was editing I noticed that even with the dead cat my audio was still a bit wishy washy when doing followcams. Any tips on better audio would be very helpful. Hell I might even be doing it wrong!