-way overused song.
-film burns at start were weird
-shaky filming on jumps sometimes
-slomo overused, normal speed means i get to see more clips too yay! slomo isnt NEEDED for action: dtf's normal edit, and this mtb edit show off normal well: http://www.pinkbike.com/news/Nick-Tingren-What-I-Do-2012.html
-don't crop unless every shot is fucking stellar and heads don't get chopped, that bugged me.
-good start! exposure and focus were good, all you need to work on is editing and a bit smoother filming.