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Rough Cut, Tourism Video. Critique

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kalum.ko
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Hey M&A,

This is some footage from quite a long time ago that I've just started editing now.
It's for a little series of minute and a half cuts of biking in our home town.
It's really mellow riding, due to the intended audience being families etc. Basically the hope for this film was to highlight a the cross-country riding in our area.

I had troubles finding a song due to licensing issues, as well as some shooting issues along the way.
All and all I think it turned okay though.

Please let me know your thoughts and if you think there are any changes that should be made..


Cheers,

Kalum



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12 years ago
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melbs
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loved the last few shots
12 years ago
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gusestomp
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I thought that was pretty awesome, but I just have a few questions.

-What is this going to be shown on? tv, film festival?
-Are you just trying to get people biking around your area?

oh and those last few shots were money.
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kalum.ko
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It's being shown to promote people coming to our town for biking. I'm thinking maybe a different song could make it better?
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kalum.ko
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*it's being shown on the internet
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gusestomp
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No I actually thought the song was a good fit for this type of video, if its for the internet throw a little bit information where and stuff like that? That's what I would think.
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Coalescent
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I loved it! My only critique was that the shot from :16-:20 might've been a little too fast of a pan. Other than that, killer!
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