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Critique on my 2 last edits!!

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BA.berger
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Sondre Bugge i kollen from Bjørn Are Berger on Vimeo.


What do you think? Ill give Karma + for good feedback!

Thanks

Feb 4 2013 12:06PM
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90053
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think about your light sources a bit more, in the first edit there were some decent shots but when the lights were behind the skiers it was pretty annoying, also at times it was difficult to see the skiers with darker clothes against the black
Feb 4 2013 12:22PM
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90053
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second edit was better though 2:40 was killer
Feb 4 2013 12:29PM
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Soja.
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i would definitely agree about the lighting, also if you avoid shooting at night you don't have to worry as much about lighting, but other than that the angles were pretty good and the glides were nice and smooth, you have a cool filming style you just need either more light or to shoot during the day
Feb 4 2013 12:43PM
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BA.berger
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Thanks for feedback!
I will try to stop making edit with bad lightning :)
Feb 5 2013 8:04AM
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90053
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haha, it's possible just a lot more difficult, don't give up on it!
Feb 5 2013 8:22AM
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