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Edit Critique - STREETDIE EP 2.2

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NPF
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Tried to keep with a faster paced edit this time. would love to hear some critiques!

(yes i know the colour on a few shots are really off. fucking half sunny/cloudy days. And also my glidecam balancing wasn't very on point when i shot this.)


Also if you have time you could rate it up!


Thanks
Feb 4 2013 1:42AM
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Michael_Thatcher
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Pretty Dope Riding, you definitely need to color the footage, and I would suggest getting a little more creative with your titles/rider intros.
Feb 4 2013 7:53PM
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DIX~
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First half had wayyy too many boring rail shots
Feb 4 2013 8:19PM
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cwillygood
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the riding was pretty sweet!

the movements of the camera seemed really violent to me, not smooth at all, alot of the same angles and the light really wasnt very visually appealing compared to a nice sunny day, id just say play around with some more angles, get that glidecam balanced up and try to film when its sunny!
Feb 4 2013 8:59PM
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NPF
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Thanks guys! yeah i was noticing all the same things when i got home and watched it back. oh well thats how you learn i guess. I've figured out my glidecam's balance a lot better now so the next one should be better with that. and it was sunny for one weekend so i got lots of shots then. the next edit will be much better i think. started working on it today. should be done in the next week or two.
Feb 4 2013 11:54PM
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