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S.C
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Hey M&A,

Its been a while and I have not been frequenting the forums recently, but here are a couple videos I have made in the past few months. Any critique is appreciated. Enjoy!

To All Gates from Stephan Chaikovsky on Vimeo.


Haiku from Stephan Chaikovsky on Vimeo.

Jan 31 2013 11:07PM
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Mag
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1st one was boring, and why did he change from being super excited when he did the u turn, but after that just went back into bored mode. shake was a problem

2nd one was a sweet idea, I really liked it, would have been a lot better if you had framed it better, and it wasn't so shaky.
Feb 1 2013 5:56AM
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S.C
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alright word up, thanks for the advice. The shakiness on the first one was intentional for the look i was going for and the 2nd one unfortunately i didnt have a glidecam for so the one follow was shaky. Its very hard framing it when you do the panels, I did what I could though
Feb 1 2013 6:31PM
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HWW
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i actually thought the first one was pretty ok. at first i was confused at what was going on, probably because it showed him walking around and looking depressed for so long, but there seemed to be a lack of emotion and change once he had made a decision to leave.
Feb 1 2013 6:44PM
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