i agree with you for the most part
music choice was seriously an issue. that should not be used for a ski edit, i think more people could back me up on it
filming wasnt bad, definitely need to learn how to use ramp and slo-mo appropriately
editing wasn't that bad, but wasn't that good. the "bad tv" effect is amateur-ish and most people know it. also the cut to black then back when music kicks back up isn't an effective use of editing
other than that, for 15 he is good! he isn't spectacular but hopefully a bright future