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Crituque my edit +k.

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redking
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+k for helpful comments
12 years ago
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FatWhore
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It was cool, but a few things...

-colors were off
- stabilization was baddd

You can learn to work with color better with this thread - https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/forums/readthread/thread_id/601464/



12 years ago
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HWW
Posts: 3084 - Karma: 3,436
No offense, here are my thoughts:

• 0:20 pole straps are there for a reason, if you don't want them, cut them off
• 1:26 please pull your pants up off cam
• music was slightly like in a video-game…
• colours were kind of weird, a bit dark at times
• take some speed into the powder, it makes much better footage and is probably more fun too
12 years ago
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*ninja*
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12 years ago
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All times are Eastern (-4); Currently it's 8:20AM