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Tanner-D
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Trying to get some feedback on my latest edit! Please check it out +k fo sho
If you don't mind rating it up click here
https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/602351.0/Discovery?c=11&o=10&t=2

Jan 19 2013 9:30PM
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Tanner-D
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https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/602351.0/Discovery?c=11&o=10&t=2
Jan 19 2013 9:31PM
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FatWhore
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I enjoyed the whole story, but the stabilization throughout the whole edit just made me want to stop it.
Jan 19 2013 9:54PM
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Tanner-D
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Thanks for the feedback. Some of the shots were done follow caming with a tripod so those are shakier but I would hope the ones that I used my flycam on would be somewhat smoother
Jan 19 2013 10:03PM
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-dAvE-
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I enjoyed it a lot! The editing was well done too. You didn't over do it with slowmotion, fastforward, etc..
Good balance with effects and the filming was also good. wasn't always same angle, had some good follow cams. Over all very cool edit! Only thing, thought it was a bit too long. Thats jsut my personal opinion.. I think edits should stay under 3min.
Jan 20 2013 12:40AM
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Tanner-D
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Thanks mang!
Jan 20 2013 12:42AM
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Soja.
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dope edit, but as stated before with some stabilization it'll be super dope
Jan 20 2013 3:00PM
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Roachey
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Looked good! Just some things I didn't like

- Little bit too long
- Shaky footage

Just watch your exposure it stayed pretty good throughout the whole edit. I just noticed some overexposed shots. The colors seemed good. Overall i liked it!
Jan 20 2013 3:40PM
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Tanner-D
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THanks for the feedback one last BUMP
Jan 21 2013 11:34PM
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really liked the beginning and the transitions, only thing that i can say is try and smoothen out a couple of the shots
Jan 22 2013 3:18PM
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