Ok, i'll try to give constructive criticism only because it shows you guys are having fun and not taking it too seriously.
For first, like most other people in this thread, you need to change the angle on your helmet mount.
I personally hate helmet mounts tho. always the same angle, cant do good follow cams, can't choose what to film. I prefer mounting it on a ski pole.
Also, the edit doesn't look like much of an edit. looks like you took all the footage from your one day of filming and just added a song. You need to cut out the boring moments, only keep the good footage.
And if its not nice out and only have a gopro to film with, it's not rlly worth it.