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First Urban Video

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Merlin.
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This was my first time filming any urban stuff so i just wanted to get some feed back. Let me know what you think.

Jan 13 2013 8:04PM
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FatWhore
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That.Was.AWESOME. Nothing wrong with it once so ever, loved it!
Jan 13 2013 8:08PM
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Merlin.
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Thanks man! that really means a lot!!
Jan 13 2013 8:19PM
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Brentizzle
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just work on your white balance mainly. It looks like you are using construction lights for your night shots which make a very yellow light. Play around with you WB settings until the snow looks white on your camera versus that nasty yellow.
Jan 13 2013 8:27PM
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Merlin.
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Yeah i never even thought to change the WB good call homie!!
Jan 13 2013 8:35PM
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[J_Gasper]
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yeah that was pretty good. as said above, make sure your WB is set correctly. the night shots were to warm (yellowish), and 1-2 of the day shots were to cold (blue).

Also, the first 2 shots were sweet, but held way to long.

overall nice job!
Jan 13 2013 8:42PM
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-Robert
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Where was that shot?I feel like I've seen some of those places.
Jan 13 2013 8:48PM
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Merlin.
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All around Pittsburgh and Cranberry Twp.
Jan 13 2013 9:28PM
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-Robert
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Oh, nevermin then. Video was sick by the way. The crashes in the begining seemed dragged out IMO and I think the 2 shots that were at springs should have been back to back. Still very sick.
Jan 13 2013 10:39PM
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Merlin.
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thanks man
Jan 14 2013 11:28PM
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SkierPT
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I liked it  a lot. Some shots needed to be "brighter". I liked the song.
First shot was a little shaky. I thought the park clips through off the vibe a little IMO. Good work though.
Jan 15 2013 2:50PM
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Ryan.Street
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Very good. Keep it up!
Jan 15 2013 3:08PM
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MLeone
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You gonna be at springs this weekend? I'm comin up
Jan 15 2013 3:11PM
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Merlin.
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Thank you !
Jan 15 2013 7:02PM
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Merlin.
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yes..
Jan 15 2013 7:04PM
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lizard.stuff
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That was way sick! I know this is kind of random, but do you know what font you used?
Jan 15 2013 8:58PM
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binturong-qwerty
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Other than the Crosby jersey, I found that pretty enjoyable to watch.
Jan 15 2013 10:53PM
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Merlin.
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I think it's called "brainflower" but im not 100% sure
Jan 16 2013 1:03PM
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Stickity
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i went to pinerichland. we should ride at springs sometime
Jan 16 2013 1:10PM
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steezysteeze
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Other than what hasn't already been said about wb the only thing I didn't like was the park shot. It didn't fit and brought me out of the moment. Nice work otherwise, though.
Jan 16 2013 4:44PM
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lizard.stuff
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Thanks!
Jan 16 2013 5:31PM
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Lick
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You do realize the saying is "whatsoever", right?
And, yes, "whatsoever" is actually a word.
Jan 16 2013 5:54PM
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blazer258
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Nice, i liked it
Jan 16 2013 6:15PM
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Merlin.
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thankyou!
Jan 16 2013 7:06PM
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