Replying to Critique My Edit: The Shitshow

Hey guys, just put out a new edit and I am looking for some critiques.  This is my first year using a DSLR and I have been learning a lot through experience and help from friends/other filmers.  I have been battling with lingering injuries this year so I have been spending more time behind the lense than years previous.  Anyways, a few things I have noticed about the edit is that some of the followcams are a little shaky and that some of my shots turned out pretty grainy.  Just lookin for some more input, let me know what you think!

THE SHITSHOW from Zack Bukovich on Vimeo.

thanks dudes!