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Hey M&A,

So with this years edit, I'm hoping to switch it up and lean a bit more to the 'storyish' side rather then just clips of spots. Hoping to go more for the style of Nipwitz Russia edit.

Here's a super rough cut of the style I'd aim for. Only 2 spots are in it.
Does the talking sound to Cliche, or just boring? Or doe's it work?

Let me know what you guys think!

Thanks!

Kalum

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Urban | Opening Spot First Cut [Kolabo] from Kalum Ko on Vimeo.