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jeb_b_vt
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Jan 2 2013 5:17PM
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Lick
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I really liked most of the shots and the song was alright.
I liked the editing and skiing was not bad.
Overall I liked it
Jan 2 2013 5:28PM
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C.A.V.
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exactly what he said^ i really liked that, chill vibe, little shaky, but it happens , just me being picky. i liked that cool gryoscope transition thing. colors were pretty good, maybe a little dark but nothing bad at all.
Jan 2 2013 7:07PM
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jeb_b_vt
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Thanks guys! Bump, anyone else?
Jan 2 2013 10:10PM
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Kervyn
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i liked it. the snowboarding was refreshing, super rad.
Jan 2 2013 10:18PM
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will_powder
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Snowboarder killed it
Jan 3 2013 1:13AM
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jeb_b_vt
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Bump. The snowboarders 15 and the skiers are 14. Anyone else?
Jan 3 2013 3:22PM
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.tony
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That was really nice! I left the morning after all the snow came, what a shame. But yeah, that was dope.
Jan 3 2013 6:26PM
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jeb_b_vt
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thanks!
Jan 3 2013 8:06PM
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jeb_b_vt
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bump
Jan 4 2013 5:48PM
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jeb_b_vt
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anyone else?
Jan 4 2013 10:07PM
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DizzyG
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Maybe try to sync the shots to the music, maybe a bit more variation in the shots, there are a lot of single trick shots. Try some longer follow cams or something. Pretty good though!
Jan 4 2013 11:29PM
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Merrill
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Most of the shots seemed a bit out of focus and it felt a bit repetitive with all of the handheld shots. The titles were on point though!
Jan 5 2013 6:37PM
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