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Critique this quick edit of mine? +K

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erikK
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50 Seconds at COP from Erik Keyser on Vimeo.

Dec 25 2012 8:48PM
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gusestomp
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Colors - looked unattractive, try and color grade a bit better.

Music - Didn't fit at all, I didn't like it.

Camera - Sorta okay, shakey at times

Overall - Keep trying.
Dec 25 2012 10:25PM
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NathanPhilips
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fun lil video!

The video is great, the main thing I would do with this video, is pop those colours a bit more with some color-grading - which edit program you using?
Dec 26 2012 10:14AM
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Kervyn
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i didnt love that it ended with a fall, or that it was dragged out
Dec 26 2012 11:58AM
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cydwhit
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mmmm...decent, As others said, color, music was ok but would have been better for a more chill feeling edit, I felt like the intro shots were a bit long, it would have been a good intro for a three minute edit but felt like overkill for 50 seconds...other than that nice job!
Dec 29 2012 4:22PM
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slugworth
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if you use that sort of music I'd suggest more slow motion to fit the vibe. Ending was kinda out of place. I'd say end on a completed trick but that's just me
Dec 30 2012 12:18AM
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3rik
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skiing really need work. go back to the basics and get a solid rail sense.

Editing was decent but yeah you definitely should have used some color grading for sure, also the slomo was not ideal when it was used, and there were parts of the video that should have been slomo'd.

I liked the track but the skiing was too fast for the song. you can always set the clip to 90% speed or something to match it up better.
Dec 30 2012 5:22PM
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